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Thursday, September 3, 2020
How to feed rats
We were learning to make instructions about something easy to do. I found it hard to make it very precise about what I had to wright. Next time I will add more longer sentences.
Hi Danika, what a great set of instructions! Your instructions are nice and specific. I don't have a pet rat but if I did I will know how to feed it. I like how you have used bright colours as it makes it more attractive to look at. Can you please look over these slides to make sure that your steps are in order! Also some of the text is hard to read as the letters are squished together very tightly.
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Hi Danika, what a great set of instructions! Your instructions are nice and specific. I don't have a pet rat but if I did I will know how to feed it. I like how you have used bright colours as it makes it more attractive to look at.
ReplyDeleteCan you please look over these slides to make sure that your steps are in order! Also some of the text is hard to read as the letters are squished together very tightly.