Next time I need to use verbs and more alliteration to make the writing more interesting so if someone was reading my writing they might make them bored.
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For our writing we have been writing Narratives. We have been learning to add a great hook in or opening line to our writing and to start our sentences in different ways.
This week we also had to have a smile and alliteration in our writing. This slide shows my hook in, sentence beginnings, simile and alliteration.
We are using our Kaiwhakarite/Self Manager learning asset by reflecting on our learning.